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MessagePosté le: Mar 28 Juil 2009, 2:05 am    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

je peux apporter une certaine contribution Laughing

Source: http://mangahelpers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=39253

Pour Naruto:

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texte en Anglais a écrit:
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Naruto Uzumaki
genin

No way you can become Hokage if you can't even save a friend.

Nin 4 - Tai 3.5 - Gen 2 - Int 3 - Str 3.5 - Spe 3.5 - Sta 5 - Sea 1.5

Ninja registration number: 012607
Birthday: 10/10 (16 years old, Libra)
Height: 166.0cm - Weight: 50.9kg - Blood type: B
Personality: doesn't like to lose, show-off
Favorite food: Ichiraku's ramen, oshiruko (sweet, VERY sweet azuki soup, ndt)
Food he dislikes: fresh vegetables
Person he would like to fight: Akatsuki
Favorite word: large serving of miso chashu (miso ramen with pork meat, ndt)
Hobby: pranks, watering plants

Graduated from Academy at: 12 years old
Became chuunin at: - years old
Mission history: 7 D-rank, 1 C-rank, 2 B-rank, 6 A-rank, 0 S-rank

With the burning will of Fire in his heart, he runs towards his dreams and his bonds!!

Over 2 years have passed, and Naruto is back to Konoha. His growth definitely deserves to be taken a look at. "I never take back my words...". He didn't lie when he said those words to Sakura. His severe training with Jiraiya earned him a new jutsu, plus he also learned how to counter genjutsu and became more skilled with shurikenjutsu and the likes, strengthening the basis of his abilities as a shinobi. Naruto is no longer a reckless ninja who fights blindly against the enemy. With his inborn "unlikeliness" and "willpower", and with the "strength" he gained from training, he will charge through his nindou (=ninja way/ethics/values, ndt) like a hurricane!!

(balloons: "I'm going to become Hokage too one day! The Kazekage will have to return me this favor.")
The self-confidence reflected in his eyes stems from his endless training. He won't stop pursuing his dreams!!

(balloons: "I'll definitely steal Sasuke back from him!"
If that's what is needed to save his comrades and friends, Naruto can become stronger than anyone else.

Surprise attack! He can still be unlikely.

(balloons: "That jutsu is nothing special, Konohamaru! Now look! I'll show you my brand-new and improved erotic ninjutsu!! Here we gooo!!")
The erotic ninjutsu praised by Jiraiya is powered up (!?) too. His teacher's influence is evident even outside of training.

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The sorrow of the ones who harbor a "bijuu" inside of their body....

[Jinchuuriki]
"Jinchuuriki" is the name given to the ones who have a "bijuu" sealed inside their body. The way people treat them is not very different from village to village. In his childhood Naruto was treated as a "menace" to the village and experienced an unbearable loneliness, that is why he can understand very well Gaara's suffering. The Leaf or the Sand makes no difference to him: he wishes nothing but to save Gaara from the darkness and share his happiness with him. Just like his teacher Iruka saved him in the past.

(balloons: "The spirit of the Kyuubi is sealed inside my body.")
When he finds out the reason why Akatsuki is after them, he's consumed with rage!!

The fate of a "jinchuuriki" and the "bijuu" sealed inside of him is to confront each other for eternity...!!

[The same suffering]
When Naruto discovered that Gaara had become Kazekage, he rejoiced with all his heart. When he had to face his death, he shed bitter tears as if it was his own demise. Only "jinchuuriki" can truly understand other "jinchuuriki". Only people who have spent their life carrying such a heavy burden can share their sorrows and joys with each other.

(balloons: "Shut up!!!")
Gaara's death feels as painful as if it were his own.

Friendship that knows no bounds can open the doors to a new future.

[Miraculous power]
Naruto ran to save Gaara, and before long, many other comrades ran to his side, both from the Leaf and the Sand. Naruto's "miraculous power" bonds people together. He can become friends with anyone, even the ones that used to be fierce enemies. His unprejudiced friendship goes beyond national borders and spreads out large, deep, bringing hope to people. Naruto has known "loneliness", thus he can understand the importance of "bonds" more than anyone else: that is why he can move other people's hearts.

(balloons: "You gave us quite a trouble...!")
The warmth coming from Naruto reminds more of a family's than a friend's. His selfless kindness soaks into one's heart.

[Entrusted future]
"Shinobi World War", then the "Crush of the Leaf"... The "Leaf" and the "Sand" have repeatedly fought each other. But now both parties can be liberated from their hostile ties and head towards a new future. As long as Naruto's "miraculous power" lights up the path they will have to walk.

(balloons: "Yes... Now I can clearly understand baachan's feelings!")
Chiyo's earnest wish will be granted, as long as Naruto and Gaara live...!!

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He will put everything on the line to protect his bonds!!

[Team Kakashi]
The "new team Kakashi" is formed, but Naruto rejects their new teammate Sai because he firmly believes Sasuke to be the only possible third member. "Teamwork is important". Yes, he knows that. But still, he cannot possibly accept as a member of "team Kakashi" someone like Sai, who slights teammates and insults Sasuke...!!

The success of a mission depends on teamwork. They must dismiss their hesitations and just look at what's in front of them...!!

(balloons: "I will do anything to save that friend.")
"For my friend". This wholehearted intent brings Naruto to cooperate with Sai.

[Impatience]
He is restless. He is cornered. Just a little more time and Orochimaru would complete his reincarnation. His friend is so close that he can almost touch him. Naruto reaches for the Kyuubi's power...

(balloons: "Sasuke...")
His "power" still isn't enough to save Sasuke! This thought makes him impatient...!!

(balloons: "I'll definitely bring Sasuke back! It's my promise of a lifetime!!")
He made a "promise" 3 years ago, and he isn't going to break it!!

[Forbidden power]
In his training with Jiraiya Naruto has learned to control the Kyuubi's strength. But such a power is too huge to be so easily dominated...

His self collapses and he destroys anyone he sees.

At this stage he transcends shinobi boundaries. With a super high-density chakra cannon he turns to ashes anything that's in front of his eyes.

[Real strength]
The power of the Kyuubi's fourth tail is a double-edged sword that even hurts his own body and the people he is supposed to protect. After hearing the truth from Yamato, Naruto decides that he won't use that power anymore. To protect the ones he cares for, he will believe in his own chakra, that is in fact as resilient as to be able to endure the Kyuubi's.

(balloons: "Get lost...!")
The Kyuubi tries to break the seal again, but Naruto stops it of his own will.

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Unbreakable "feelings" burn in his heart....

[A voice that cannot reach]
Sasuke, whom he longed to meet again, is there in front of his eyes...!! But his heart is distant, even more than it was until now. Yet Naruto believes that somewhere deep in his heart Sasuke still cares for his friends; that he, the one who left him alive in the Valley of the End, still hasn't severed his "bond" with them. Nevertheless, Sasuke cold-heartedly points his sword at Naruto. Is it too late...!? He shakes off the resignation flitting through his mind and summons his fighting spirit. He cannot give up. He has to fulfill the promise!!

As if to highlight the distance between them, Sasuke stands far off.

Sasuke's eyes are even colder than before. His blade attacks Naruto without hesitation!!

"I will never give up".... A "possibility" born from his indomitable nindou.

[Hope]
Sasuke's rescue was a failure. Naruto was shown the difference in their abilities, plus his longstanding feelings were completely rejected. But thanks to the words of his teammates he stands up again. The power gap can be filled. If his voice doesn't reach, he can just step closer. Most importantly, he has friends ready to join forces with him. His fighting spirit burning, Naruto once again runs with his teammates!! Because he believes that "not giving up" is the only means to save Sasuke....

(balloons: "I'm here too! I'll become strong with you!!")
Naruto is able to stand up over and over again because he has friends that run with him.

(balloons: "Well, just watch him and see yourself. He's completely different than before!")
His eyes look straight ahead, unwavering!!

{page 032}
A portion of the "legend" is visible on his back....

[Training]
The "Kagebunshin training method" devised by Kakashi perfectly suits Naruto's huge amount of chakra. He manages to achieve "property modification" in only two days, while it normally requires years of practice.

Naruto trains to master a new jutsu that even Yondaime couldn't bring to completion!!

[Sasuke]
The presence of a good rival can become a driving force to accelerate one's growth. The existence of Sasuke, the genius boy always in front of Naruto, adds "zeal" to his training! And it eventually makes his talent bloom...!!

(balloons: "I gotta catch up with that Sasuke!!")
It's because Sasuke exists that Naruto can become stronger.

[A shinobi that can surpass the Fourth Hokage]
"Fuuton - Rasenshuriken", the still incomplete ultimate ninjutsu that nobody has ever used. Not even Yondaime Hokage could complete this jutsu, but Naruto was able to polish it up and use it in an actual fight...!! The Academy's loser is about to evolve into a shinobi that will become the main force of the next era!!

"Kagebunshin no Jutsu", which can store a person's experience data, is put to practical use right away.

(balloons: "Take this!")
The "spiral" (rasen, ndt) created by the Fourth is passed on to his son and now swirls like a storm!!
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texte en Anglais a écrit:
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Sasuke Uchiha
- (no rank, ndt)

With my hatred... I'll turn the illusion into reality!

Nin 5 - Tai 3.5 - Gen 4 - Int 3.5 - Str 3.5 - Spe 4.5 - Sta 3.5 - Sea 4

Ninja registration number: 012606
Birthday: 7/23 (16 years old, Leo)
Height: 168.0cm - Weight: 52.2kg - Blood type: AB
Personality: cool, bluffer
Favorite food: omusubi (okaka) (omusubi is like onigiri; okaka is dried bonito, ndt), tomato
Food he dislikes: natto (fermented soybeans, ndt), sweet stuff
Person he would like to fight: the upper echelons of Konoha
Favorite word: power
Hobby: training, taking walks

Graduated from Academy at: 12 years old
Became chuunin at: - years old
Mission history: 7 D-rank, 1 C-rank, 2 B-rank, 6 A-rank, 0 S-rank

After brushing away the darkness that veiled his heart, the "Uchiha" falcon is now ready to spread his wings towards another goal.

Sasuke Uchiha, the boy who set "revenge" as his raison d'être. He erased anything that could pose an obstacle to his goal and sternly rejected warmth and peace to pursue greater power. It was a rough and gloomy path that meant crawling through the earth like a snake — as he also labeled himself —, prowling after his prey in the darkness. When Sasuke fulfilled his long-cherished ambition, revenge, a new world called "truth" opened his doors to him and the chains that bound his heart to the ground finally came off. Now the young falcon soars through the sky, majestic, surveying the landscape spreading out below him with the heavenly eyes bestowed upon him by the "strongest clan", finally able to decide his next route of his own free will! Even though he knows that what is waiting for him is another bloody road....

Three years have passed since Sasuke left the village. Now he radiates the same eerie aura as a sharp blade.

(balloons: "At last, I'm here.")
To Sasuke the path of revenge against Itachi is also a quest to look into the truth about his clan.

Sasuke was endowed with shinobi talent since when he was born, but during the years he spent away from the village his fighting skills improved even more rapidly.

(balloons: "Don't aim for their vital spots.")
He doesn't like to kill when unneeded. Is it a natural kindness flowing through his veins...?

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The time has come.... The noble "falcon" swallows the "snake" and leaves the nest!!

[Rebellion]
For the sake of revenge Sasuke, willing to go as far as to stain his reputation becoming a "nukenin", has run to Orochimaru's lair. But even though he abandoned his village, it doesn't mean that he lost his pride as a member of the strongest clan...! He does accept Orochimaru's instruction, but meanwhile he rejects his evil beliefs and waits for the opportunity to rebel. When the Serpent misjudges Sasuke's growth, the "perfect chance" comes!

(balloons: "...I have the feeling I can be heartless with you too.")
(balloons: "You should have understood, by now....")
Sasuke decides that Orochimaru has nothing left to teach him anymore, so he makes his move! Even the "reincarnation ceremony" is ineffective against the Uchiha's power.

[The power of the white snake]
Orochimaru fell in love with Sasuke's body, endowed with the "Sharingan", and now he looks forward to his next reincarnation, when he will finally be able to take hold of the "vessel of his dreams". But before long, his ambition crumbles to pieces on account of that vessel's flawlessness. The noble blood flowing through him gifts him with a power that exceeds Orochimaru's imagination. Sasuke swallows up the abilities of the white snake, together with the fangs that longed for that blood.

(balloons: "My wounds have been healing faster since I absorbed Orochimaru.")
The power of the white snake also granted Sasuke a miraculously fast recovery speed.

Severed bonds and new ties.... All for the purpose of defeating his brother.

[Reunion]
Naruto, a friend. In the past, parting from him had been as painful as ripping off half of his own body, and even now that he has left the village the boy is still pursuing him. Nevertheless, meeting him again after three years doesn't shake his heart in the least. Bonds might confuse you, thus you have to "severe" them! The only tie an avenger needs is the one going by the name of "hate" with his brother...

Sasuke can behave cold-heartedly even in front of Naruto. This should have suggested him that the time has come for him to carry out his revenge.

(balloons: "I just didn't want to get stronger the way he told me to.")
His firm determination is also further confirmation of his intention to part from them.

["Hebi" is formed]
Now that Sasuke has gotten rid of all unnecessary bonds to pursue the strength needed to carry out his revenge, he decides to take another step towards the fulfillment of his ambition... He assembles a few comrades and thus earns new ties. But team "Hebi", formed for the sole purpose of "defeating Itachi Uchiha", consists of people who decided to accompany Sasuke weighing the merits and demerits of such action, so it might as well be likened to an unstable house of cards. The force that holds together this team liable to dissolve in thin air at any minute is definitely the awe and respect its members feel towards Sasuke's absolute authority.

(balloons: "My goal is to kill Akatsuki's Itachi Uchiha. And I want you to help me.")
Each member of "Hebi" is specialized in something, for example detection or close range combat. This facilitates independent action.

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Studied fighting skills! His power surpasses even Akatsuki.

[Godlike speed]
Adding up to his innate talent, Orochimaru's strength — "cursed seal" included — granted him a power a normal shinobi could not even dream of. What one may find especially interesting is his speed, that has stood out ever since he was a genin. When that godlike speed is supported by Sharingan's reflexes, anyone standing before Sasuke is unworthy of existence.

In a blink he's in front of his opponent, then a flash of sword...!! Before his speed, even Akatsuki members hold their breath in awe.

[Tactics]
Sasuke's excellent resourcefulness as a shinobi is particularly evident in his battle sense and tactical skills. During fights he observes his opponent and accurately sees through his abilities without losing his calm, then he correctly chooses the most effective means and ninjutsu to counter him among the rich variety of items he has in stock. Moreover, at times his resoluteness enables him to pick painful strategies in which he needs to get hurt in order to win against the enemy. All these characteristics make Sasuke a remarkable shinobi.

His gaze is fixed upon the word "victory". That is why he can also see the way that leads to it.

The symbol of the "cursed bloodline" frightens and subdues the enemy.

[Insight]
The "Sharingan" is the symbol of the illustrious "Uchiha clan" and also the reason behind the tragic fate of their bloodline. Sasuke is proud of that power, and that is why he always makes full use of its abilities when fighting. He deduces a jutsu's elemental property from the seals performed by its user, then he is able to determine at once the attack range from the color of the chakra. So far, the images of his defeated opponents have always been reflected in his eyes...

(balloons: "Haha... Why?")
Any plan the enemy might think of or any trick he might use are fruitless in front of Sasuke.

[Eye power]
The main reason why the "Sharingan" was feared by everyone, including the inhabitants of the village, is the power hidden in those eyes, able to subdue even "bijuu". Sasuke, who is rapidly mastering his skills as an Uchiha, is also gradually awakening to that cursed power.

(balloons: "Those eyes... How did you dare... control me... with those eyes...!")
The ultimate power of the "Sharingan", that once could tame even the "Kyuubi". A portion of it is visible in Sasuke when he is able to control Manda.

(balloons: "Now I can see it... So this was your mysterious power....")
Sasuke's eye power is even able to seize the Kyuubi that dwells in Naruto's body!! Looking at that ominous strength, the Kyuubi is reminded of Madara Uchiha...

{page 046-047}
The day he reunites with his brother is the day he will have to fight until the death of one of them!!

[Illusion and reality]
Ever since he was little, when his brother stole eveything from him, Sasuke's utmost goal has been to take revenge on him. Now that they met again they throw knives and countless genjutsu at each other, each for the purpose of realizing his own desire, that is to crush the other's dreams! But in this fight in which illusion and reality intertwine, there is one truth Sasuke has to rely upon: the tragedy of that night. And the seething hatred for his brother, Itachi.

(balloons: "Try to recreate it.")
Ever since that day the two Uchiha have walked different paths. But fate pulls them together again and invites them to fight.

Both of them use countless genjutsu while at the same time throwing daggers and other weapons at each other. Calling this fight breathtaking is an understatement.

Sasuke is cornered by the eternal hell created by the "Mangekyou Sharingan"...!!

Perhaps on account of his deep hatred towards his brother, Sasuke manages to beat the "Mangekyou Sharingan", whose abilities are way superior to the ones of a normal "Sharingan"...!!

Revenge is finished.... And now another bloodstained quest for retaliation awaits him.

[Conclusion]
Sasuke abandoned his village, friends and teacher to defeat Itachi. His trump card, "Kirin", might as well be called a compilation of all the pieces composing his nindou, since he devised it combining a Katon jutsu — Uchiha's forte — and the Raiton he was taught by Kakashi. With this technique he tries to put a stop to everything, but Itachi, as if reading his brother's mind, counters with the secret jutsu "Susanoo"...! The two final techniques collide, swallowing hostility, sorrow, past, future—everything, and sublimating it beyond the rainy sky...

(balloons: "To make a Raiton jutsu!")
Sasuke pronounces his "last blow" and thousands of birds starts chirping around his arm...!!

When his desperate fight is over, Sasuke collapses to the ground beside his fallen brother. Cold rain washes away their sins.

[Entrustment]
Revenge is accomplished. Yet the only things Sasuke earned from it are a harsh truth and his brother's sorrowful love... Remorse, loss, desolation—the feelings that fill up his heart turn into drops and fall from his eyes. His brother's back, which he thought he had surpassed, grows dim far away, beyond the tears. When he eventually realizes that he will never again be able to reach him, the wishes left by his dearest person appear in his eyes....!

(balloons: "The erasure of your cursed seal and the death of the person closest to you... The fight was also aimed at making you awaken the Mangekyou Sharingan.")
Besides giving Sasuke a new power, Itachi also released him from Orochimaru's curse.

(balloons: "...crush Konoha.")
With the power and wishes Itachi left to him, Sasuke heads towards his new goal: destroying the village his brother had protected!

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MessagePosté le: Mar 28 Juil 2009, 4:50 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

A merci Beaucoup Bleuet t'es un ange ^^

J'aimerais aider mais je suis une vrais quiche en traduction. gene

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MessagePosté le: Jeu 30 Juil 2009, 4:06 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

La traduction est finalement terminée, ça a été assez long. Razz
Donc la voilà, s'il y a la moindre erreur ou proposition pour changer la traduction...prévenez.

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Uchiha Sasuke
Aucun rang

« Avec ma haine…Je rendrai l’illusion réalité ! »


Ninjutsu – 5 Force - 3.5
Taijutsu – 3.5 Rapidité - 4.5
Genjutsu – 4 Résistance - 3.5
Intelligence – 3.5 Sceau - 4

Numéro d’immatriculation Ninja : 012606
Anniversaire : 7/23 (Agé de 16 ans)
Taille : 168.0 cm – Poids : 52.2 kg – Groupe sanguin : AB
Personnalité : Cool, bluffer
Nourriture favorite : Omusubi (est une boulette de riz japonaise, souvent en forme de triangle ou d'ovale et souvent enveloppée d'une algue noir), tomate.
Nourriture détestée : Natto (aliment traditionnel à base de haricots de soja fermentés), bonbon (ou chose douce).
Personne qu’il veut affronter : Hautes autorités de Konoha.
Mot favoris : Puissance
Hobbies : Entraînement, promenade

Gradé de l’académie à : 12 ans
Historique de missions :
Rang D : 7 Rang B : 2 Rang S : 0
Rang C : 1 Rang A : 6

Après avoir effacé les ténèbres de son cœur, le faucon Uchiha est maintenant prêt à étendre ses ailes vers un autre but. Uchiha Sasuke, le garçon qui a mis sa « vengeance » comme sa raison d’être. Il a effacé tout ce qui pourrait faire obstacle à son objectif et sévèrement rejeté la chaleur et la paix à rechercher une plus grande puissance. Il s’agit d’un chemin sombre et rugueux qui signifiait ramper sur la terre comme un serpent – comme il a également marqué lui-même -, rôdant après sa proie dans les ténèbres. Quand Sasuke a accompli son ambition longtemps chérie, la vengeance, un nouveau monde appelé « verité » ouvrit ses portes et les chaines qui lièrent son cœur à la terre se sont finalement déliées.

Maintenant, le jeune faucon monte en flèche à travers le ciel, majestueux, scrutant le paysage répandant au-dessous de lui de ses yeux célestes concédés par « le clan le plus fort », finalement capable de décider de son chemin suivant son plein gré ! Bien qu’il sache que ce qui l’attend est une autre route ensanglantée…

Trois années ont passée depuis que Sasuke a quitté le village. Maintenant, il émet la même aura frémissante qu’une lame aiguisée. A Sasuke le chemin de la vengeance contre Itachi qui est aussi une quête à la recherche de la vérité sur son clan.
Sasuke fut doté du talent Shinobi depuis sa naissance, mais durant des années, il a passé loin du village à améliorer ses compétences de combat même plus rapidement. Il n'aime pas tuer inutilement.

Est-ce une bonté naturelle coulant par ses veines ... ?

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Le temps est venu…le noble « faucon » avale le « serpent » et quitte le nid !!


[Rebellion]

Pour la vengeance de Sasuke, disposée à aller aussi loin que recevoir une réputation de “nukenin”, a couru à repaire d’Orochimaru. Mais bien qu’il ait abandonné son village, ça ne signifie pas qu’il ait perdu la fierté d’un membre du plus puissant des clans… ! Il accepte les instructions d’Orochimaru, mais en attendant, il rejette ses mauvaises croyances et attend l’opportunité de se rebeller. Quand le serpent méjuge la croissance de Sasuke, la « chance parfaite » vient !

(Bulles : «... j'ai l'impression que je peux être sans pitié avec vous. »)
(bulles: « Vous devriez avoir compris, maintenant .... »)


Sasuke décide qu’Orochimaru n’a plus rien à lui enseigner de plus, il décide donc d’agir ! Même la « cérémonie de réincarnation » est inefficace face au pouvoir de l’Uchiha.

[Le pouvoir du serpent blanc]

Orochimaru est tombé amoureux du corps de Sasuke, doté du « Sharingan » et maintenant se réjouit de sa prochaine réincarnation, quand il sera finalement capable de prendre en main le « bateau de ses rêves ». Mais avec le temps, son ambition s’effrite en morceaux sur le compte de ce « navire impeccable ». Le noble sang qui coule en lui offre un pouvoir qui dépasse l’imagination d’Orochimaru. Sasuke absorbe les capacités du grand serpent blanc, avec les crocs qui furent assoiffées de ce sang.

(Bulles: « Mes blessures guérissent plus rapidement depuis que j’ai absorbé les capacités d’Orochimaru. ») .

Le pouvoir du serpent blanc accorde également à Sasuke une rapide et miraculeuse récupération. Des liens coupés et de nouveaux se forment…tous dans le but de vaincre son frère.

[Réunion]

Naruto, un ami. Dans le passé, se séparer de lui a été aussi douloureux que l’extraction de la moitié de son propre corps et même maintenant qu’il a quitté le village le garçon est toujours à sa poursuite. Néanmoins, le rencontrer à nouveau trois ans après n’a pas secoué son cœur le moins du monde.

Les liens peuvent vous rendre confus, vous devez donc les minimiser !

Le seul lien dont à besoin un vengeur est celui allant par le nom de « haine » envers son frère… Sasuke peut se comporter impitoyablement même devant Naruto. Cela devrait lui avoir suggéré que le temps est venu pour lui d’effectuer sa vengeance.

(Bulles : « Je ne veux pas obtenir de la puissance en suivant la voix qu’il m’a indiqué. »)
Sa ferme détermination est également obtenir confirmation de son intention de faire partie d’eux.

[« Hebi » est formée]

Maintenant que Sasuke s'est débarrassé de toutes les obligations inutiles de poursuivre la force nécessaire pour accomplir sa vengeance, il décide de prendre une nouvelle étape vers la réalisation de ses ambitions…
Il réunit quelques camarades et bénéficie ainsi de nouveaux liens. Mas la team « Hebi », formée dans le seul but de « Vaincre Uchiha Itachi », consiste en des gens qui ont décidé d’accompagner Sasuke mesurant les avantages et inconvénients d’une telle action, leur lien pourrait donc être aussi instable qu’un château de carte. La force qui les unit pourrait se révéler aussi ténu qu'un filet d'air et disparaître à n'importe quel moment c'est définitivement la crainte et le respect que les membres ressentent envers l'absolue autorité de Sasuke qui les réunit.

(Bulles : « Mon but est de tuer Uchiha Itachi de l’Akatsuki. Et j’ai besoin de votre aide. »)
Chaque membre de « Hebi » est spécialisé dans un domaine, pour exemple la détection ou le combat rapproché. Cela facilite l’action indépendante.

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Compétences du combat étudiées ! Sa puissance dépasse même l’Akatsuki


[Divine rapidité]

En plus de son talent inné, la force d’Orochimaru – « sceau maudit » inclus – augmente sa puissance, qu’un simple Shinobi ne peut même imaginer. Ce que l’on peut trouver de spécialement intéressant en sa vitesse, qui s’est grandement développée depuis qu’il était Genin.

Quand cette rapidité divine est appuyée par les réflexes du Sharingan, n’importe qui se tenant devant Sasuke est indigne d’existence.
En un clin d’œil il apparaît devant son opposant, puis un coup d’épée rapide…!! Devant sa rapidité, même les membres de l’Akatsuki retiennent leur soufflé dans la crainte.

[Tactiques]

L’excellente ingéniosité de Sasuke en tant que Shinobi est particulièrement évidente lors des combats de sens et de compétences tactiles. Durant les combats, il observe son opposant et voit avec précision ses compétences sans perdre son calme, ensuite il choisit correctement le moyen et le ninjutsu le plus efficace pour contrer l’adversaire parmi le riche éventail de techniques qu’il possède en réserve. En outre, sa détermination lui permet aussi de choisir les stratégies les plus pénibles dans lesquelles il a besoin de se blesser pour gagner face à son ennemi. Toutes ces caractéristiques font de Sasuke un remarquable Shinobi.

Son regards est fixé sur le mot « Victoire ». C’est pourquoi il peut également voir le chemin qui mène à elle. Le symbole de la « lignée maudite » effraie et soumet l’ennemi.

[Perspicacité]

Le « Sharingan » est le symbole de l’illustre « Clan Uchiha » et également la raison derrière le tragique destin de leur lignée maudite.
Sasuke est fier de ce pouvoir et c’est pourquoi il utilise toujours ses meilleures capacités lors d’affrontement. Il déduit la propriété élémentaire du jutsu à partir des sceaux effectués par son utilisateur, ensuite il est également capable de déterminer le rang de l’attaque à partir de la couleur du chakra.

(Bulles : « Haha…Pourquoi ? »)
Chaque plan que l’ennemi peut penser ou piège qu’il peut utiliser sont vains face à Sasuke.

[Pouvoir des yeux]

La principale raison pour laquelle le «Sharingan» est craint par tous, y compris les habitants du village, est la puissance cachée dans ces yeux, capable de maîtriser les "bijuu". Sasuke, qui a rapidement maîtrisé les capacités en tant qu’Uchiha s’éveille aussi graduellement à ce pouvoir maudit.

(Bulles : « Ces yeux…Comment as-tu pu…me contrôler…avec ces yeux… ! »)
L’ultime pouvoir du « Sharingan » qui pourrait une fois encore dompter le « Kyuubi » en Naruto. Une partie de celui-ci est visible en Sasuke lorsqu’il est capable de contrôler Manda.

(Bulles : « Maintenant je peux le voir…c’était donc ça, la source de ton mystérieux pouvoir… »)
Le pouvoir des yeux de Sasuke est même capable de saisir le Kyuubi qui demeure dans le corps de Naruto !! En regardant d’un mauvais œil ce pouvoir, le Kyuubi se remémore Uchiha Madara…

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Le jour où il se réunira avec son frère est le jour où il devra combattre jusqu’à la mort de l’un d’entre eux !!


[Illusion et réalité]

Même depuis son plus jeune âge, quand son frère a volé tout de lui, le but suprême de Sasuke a été de prendre sa revanche sur lui. Maintenant qu’ils se sont rencontrer une nouvelle fois, ils se jettent des kunai et d’innombrables genjutsu l’un à l’autre, chacun pour réaliser leur propre désir, qui est d’écraser le rêve de l’autre !

Mais dans ce combat où illusion et réalité s’entrelacent, il y a une vérité sur laquelle Sasuke doit compter : La tragédie de cette nuit-là et de la haine qui s’embrase envers son frère, Itachi.

(Bulles : « Tenter de la recréer »)
Depuis ce jour où les deux Uchiha ont marché sur différent chemins. Mais le destin les attire à nouveau ensemble et les invite à se battre.

Les deux utilisent d’innombrables genjutsu pendant qu’ils jettent des poignards et autres armes de chaque côté. Appeler ce combat « le souffle court » est un euphémisme.
Sasuke est accaparé par l’enfer éternel créé par le « Mangekyou Sharinan »… !!

Peut être en raison de sa profonde haine à l’égard de son frère, Sasuke réussit à vaincre le « Mangekyou Sharingan », dont les capacités sont bien supérieures à un « Sharingan » normal…!!
La vengeance est terminée…Et maintenant une autre quête tracée par le sang l’attend.

[Conclusion]

Sasuke abandonna son village, ses amis et son professeur pour vaincre Itachi. Son atout, « Kirin », pourrait ainsi bien être appelée une compilation de toutes les parties composants sont Nindou, depuis qu’il l’inventa en fusionnant les techniques de Katon - le fort des Uchiha – et le Raiton, enseigné par Kakashi. Avec cette technique il tente de mettre fin à tout, mais Itachi, comme s’il lisait en l’esprit de son frère, contre-attaqua avec le jutsu secret « Susanoo »… !
Les deux techniques finales entre en collision, avalant hostilité, douleur, passé, futur – tout et au-delà de la sublimation des cieux pluvieux…

(Bulles : « Pour faire un jutsu Raiton ! »)
Sasuke prononce son « dernier coup » et des milliers d’oiseaux commencent à chanter autour de son bras… !!

Lorsque son combat désespéré est terminé, Sasuke s’effondre sur le sol à côté de son frère déchu. La pluie glaciale emporte leurs pêchés.

[Confidence]

La vengeance est accomplie. Pourtant, les seules choses gagnées de Sasuke sont une dure réalité et un triste amour de son frère…Remord, perte, désolation – les sentiments qui remplissent son cœur se transforment en chute pour ses yeux. De retour sur son frère, qu’il pensait avoir surpassé, devient terne, au-delà des larmes. Quand il a finalement réalisé qu’il ne sera plus jamais capable de l’atteindre, les souhaits laissés par la personne qu’il chérit plus que tous apparaît devant ses yeux… !

(Bulles : « La disparition de ton sceau maudit et la mort de la personne la plus chère à tes yeux…Le combat n’avait que clairement le but de t’éveiller au Mangekyou Sharingan. »)
A côté des nouveaux pouvoirs donnés à Sasuke, Itachi l’a également libéré du sceau d’Orochimaru.

(Bulles : « …Ecraser Konoha. »)
Avec le pouvoir et les souhaits laissés par Itachi, Sasuke se met en tête d’un nouveau but : Détruire le village que sont frère à protégé !


Le texte en Anglais, au cas où il y aurait des erreurs :
Citation:

{page 040-041}
Sasuke Uchiha
- (no rank, ndt)

With my hatred... I'll turn the illusion into reality!

Nin 5 - Tai 3.5 - Gen 4 - Int 3.5 - Str 3.5 - Spe 4.5 - Sta 3.5 - Sea 4

Ninja registration number: 012606
Birthday: 7/23 (16 years old, Leo)
Height: 168.0cm - Weight: 52.2kg - Blood type: AB
Personality: cool, bluffer
Favorite food: omusubi (okaka) (omusubi is like onigiri; okaka is dried bonito, ndt), tomato
Food he dislikes: natto (fermented soybeans, ndt), sweet stuff
Person he would like to fight: the upper echelons of Konoha
Favorite word: power
Hobby: training, taking walks

Graduated from Academy at: 12 years old
Became chuunin at: - years old
Mission history: 7 D-rank, 1 C-rank, 2 B-rank, 6 A-rank, 0 S-rank

After brushing away the darkness that veiled his heart, the "Uchiha" falcon is now ready to spread his wings towards another goal.

Sasuke Uchiha, the boy who set "revenge" as his raison d'être. He erased anything that could pose an obstacle to his goal and sternly rejected warmth and peace to pursue greater power. It was a rough and gloomy path that meant crawling through the earth like a snake — as he also labeled himself —, prowling after his prey in the darkness. When Sasuke fulfilled his long-cherished ambition, revenge, a new world called "truth" opened his doors to him and the chains that bound his heart to the ground finally came off. Now the young falcon soars through the sky, majestic, surveying the landscape spreading out below him with the heavenly eyes bestowed upon him by the "strongest clan", finally able to decide his next route of his own free will! Even though he knows that what is waiting for him is another bloody road....

Three years have passed since Sasuke left the village. Now he radiates the same eerie aura as a sharp blade.

(balloons: "At last, I'm here.")
To Sasuke the path of revenge against Itachi is also a quest to look into the truth about his clan.

Sasuke was endowed with shinobi talent since when he was born, but during the years he spent away from the village his fighting skills improved even more rapidly.

(balloons: "Don't aim for their vital spots.")
He doesn't like to kill when unneeded. Is it a natural kindness flowing through his veins...?

{page 042-043}
The time has come.... The noble "falcon" swallows the "snake" and leaves the nest!!

[Rebellion]
For the sake of revenge Sasuke, willing to go as far as to stain his reputation becoming a "nukenin", has run to Orochimaru's lair. But even though he abandoned his village, it doesn't mean that he lost his pride as a member of the strongest clan...! He does accept Orochimaru's instruction, but meanwhile he rejects his evil beliefs and waits for the opportunity to rebel. When the Serpent misjudges Sasuke's growth, the "perfect chance" comes!

(balloons: "...I have the feeling I can be heartless with you too.")
(balloons: "You should have understood, by now....")
Sasuke decides that Orochimaru has nothing left to teach him anymore, so he makes his move! Even the "reincarnation ceremony" is ineffective against the Uchiha's power.

[The power of the white snake]
Orochimaru fell in love with Sasuke's body, endowed with the "Sharingan", and now he looks forward to his next reincarnation, when he will finally be able to take hold of the "vessel of his dreams". But before long, his ambition crumbles to pieces on account of that vessel's flawlessness. The noble blood flowing through him gifts him with a power that exceeds Orochimaru's imagination. Sasuke swallows up the abilities of the white snake, together with the fangs that longed for that blood.

(balloons: "My wounds have been healing faster since I absorbed Orochimaru.")
The power of the white snake also granted Sasuke a miraculously fast recovery speed.

Severed bonds and new ties.... All for the purpose of defeating his brother.

[Reunion]
Naruto, a friend. In the past, parting from him had been as painful as ripping off half of his own body, and even now that he has left the village the boy is still pursuing him. Nevertheless, meeting him again after three years doesn't shake his heart in the least. Bonds might confuse you, thus you have to "severe" them! The only tie an avenger needs is the one going by the name of "hate" with his brother...

Sasuke can behave cold-heartedly even in front of Naruto. This should have suggested him that the time has come for him to carry out his revenge.

(balloons: "I just didn't want to get stronger the way he told me to.")
His firm determination is also further confirmation of his intention to part from them.

["Hebi" is formed]
Now that Sasuke has gotten rid of all unnecessary bonds to pursue the strength needed to carry out his revenge, he decides to take another step towards the fulfillment of his ambition... He assembles a few comrades and thus earns new ties. But team "Hebi", formed for the sole purpose of "defeating Itachi Uchiha", consists of people who decided to accompany Sasuke weighing the merits and demerits of such action, so it might as well be likened to an unstable house of cards. The force that holds together this team liable to dissolve in thin air at any minute is definitely the awe and respect its members feel towards Sasuke's absolute authority.

(balloons: "My goal is to kill Akatsuki's Itachi Uchiha. And I want you to help me.")
Each member of "Hebi" is specialized in something, for example detection or close range combat. This facilitates independent action.

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Studied fighting skills! His power surpasses even Akatsuki.

[Godlike speed]
Adding up to his innate talent, Orochimaru's strength — "cursed seal" included — granted him a power a normal shinobi could not even dream of. What one may find especially interesting is his speed, that has stood out ever since he was a genin. When that godlike speed is supported by Sharingan's reflexes, anyone standing before Sasuke is unworthy of existence.

In a blink he's in front of his opponent, then a flash of sword...!! Before his speed, even Akatsuki members hold their breath in awe.

[Tactics]
Sasuke's excellent resourcefulness as a shinobi is particularly evident in his battle sense and tactical skills. During fights he observes his opponent and accurately sees through his abilities without losing his calm, then he correctly chooses the most effective means and ninjutsu to counter him among the rich variety of items he has in stock. Moreover, at times his resoluteness enables him to pick painful strategies in which he needs to get hurt in order to win against the enemy. All these characteristics make Sasuke a remarkable shinobi.

His gaze is fixed upon the word "victory". That is why he can also see the way that leads to it.

The symbol of the "cursed bloodline" frightens and subdues the enemy.

[Insight]
The "Sharingan" is the symbol of the illustrious "Uchiha clan" and also the reason behind the tragic fate of their bloodline. Sasuke is proud of that power, and that is why he always makes full use of its abilities when fighting. He deduces a jutsu's elemental property from the seals performed by its user, then he is able to determine at once the attack range from the color of the chakra. So far, the images of his defeated opponents have always been reflected in his eyes...

(balloons: "Haha... Why?")
Any plan the enemy might think of or any trick he might use are fruitless in front of Sasuke.

[Eye power]
The main reason why the "Sharingan" was feared by everyone, including the inhabitants of the village, is the power hidden in those eyes, able to subdue even "bijuu". Sasuke, who is rapidly mastering his skills as an Uchiha, is also gradually awakening to that cursed power.

(balloons: "Those eyes... How did you dare... control me... with those eyes...!")
The ultimate power of the "Sharingan", that once could tame even the "Kyuubi". A portion of it is visible in Sasuke when he is able to control Manda.

(balloons: "Now I can see it... So this was your mysterious power....")
Sasuke's eye power is even able to seize the Kyuubi that dwells in Naruto's body!! Looking at that ominous strength, the Kyuubi is reminded of Madara Uchiha...

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The day he reunites with his brother is the day he will have to fight until the death of one of them!!

[Illusion and reality]
Ever since he was little, when his brother stole eveything from him, Sasuke's utmost goal has been to take revenge on him. Now that they met again they throw knives and countless genjutsu at each other, each for the purpose of realizing his own desire, that is to crush the other's dreams! But in this fight in which illusion and reality intertwine, there is one truth Sasuke has to rely upon: the tragedy of that night. And the seething hatred for his brother, Itachi.

(balloons: "Try to recreate it.")
Ever since that day the two Uchiha have walked different paths. But fate pulls them together again and invites them to fight.

Both of them use countless genjutsu while at the same time throwing daggers and other weapons at each other. Calling this fight breathtaking is an understatement.

Sasuke is cornered by the eternal hell created by the "Mangekyou Sharingan"...!!

Perhaps on account of his deep hatred towards his brother, Sasuke manages to beat the "Mangekyou Sharingan", whose abilities are way superior to the ones of a normal "Sharingan"...!!

Revenge is finished.... And now another bloodstained quest for retaliation awaits him.

[Conclusion]
Sasuke abandoned his village, friends and teacher to defeat Itachi. His trump card, "Kirin", might as well be called a compilation of all the pieces composing his nindou, since he devised it combining a Katon jutsu — Uchiha's forte — and the Raiton he was taught by Kakashi. With this technique he tries to put a stop to everything, but Itachi, as if reading his brother's mind, counters with the secret jutsu "Susanoo"...! The two final techniques collide, swallowing hostility, sorrow, past, future—everything, and sublimating it beyond the rainy sky...

(balloons: "To make a Raiton jutsu!")
Sasuke pronounces his "last blow" and thousands of birds starts chirping around his arm...!!

When his desperate fight is over, Sasuke collapses to the ground beside his fallen brother. Cold rain washes away their sins.

[Entrustment]
Revenge is accomplished. Yet the only things Sasuke earned from it are a harsh truth and his brother's sorrowful love... Remorse, loss, desolation—the feelings that fill up his heart turn into drops and fall from his eyes. His brother's back, which he thought he had surpassed, grows dim far away, beyond the tears. When he eventually realizes that he will never again be able to reach him, the wishes left by his dearest person appear in his eyes....!

(balloons: "The erasure of your cursed seal and the death of the person closest to you... The fight was also aimed at making you awaken the Mangekyou Sharingan.")
Besides giving Sasuke a new power, Itachi also released him from Orochimaru's curse.

(balloons: "...crush Konoha.")
With the power and wishes Itachi left to him, Sasuke heads towards his new goal: destroying the village his brother had protected!


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MessagePosté le: Jeu 30 Juil 2009, 9:30 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Pour ta traduction Sasuke0801, je peux te faire des propositions. Tu en feras ce que tu voudras.

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Bonds might confuse you, thus you have to « severe » them !

Les liens peuvent vous rendre confus, vous devez donc les minimisés.

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But team "Hebi", formed for the sole purpose of "defeating Itachi Uchiha", consists of people who decided to accompany Sasuke weighing the merits and demerits of such action, so it might as well be likened to an unstable house of cards. The force that holds together this team liable to dissolve in thin air at any minute is definitely the awe and respect its members feel towards Sasuke's absolute authority.


Mais la team "Hebi", fut formée dans le seul but de "vaincre Itachi Uchiha", elle est composé de membres qui ont décidé d'accompagner Sasuke en mesurant les avantages et les désavantages d'un tel objectif, leur lien pourrait-être aussi instable qu'un château de carte. La force qui les unit pourrait se révéler aussi ténu qu'un filet d'air et disparaître à n'importe quel moment c'est définitivement la crainte et le respect que les membres ressentent envers l'absolue autorité de Sasuke qui les réunit.

Je tiens à te féliciter à nouveau Sasuke0801 pour ton travail admirable.

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MessagePosté le: Sam 01 Aoû 2009, 6:18 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Merci pour tes propositions, j'ai donc changé des passages, en gardant certains bouts de ma traduction.

J'ai aussi rajouté et fini l'avant dernière page sur Sasuke. Il me reste plus qu'à finir la dernière et la conclusion.
Et merci pour les félicitations. Wink

EDIT :

Je viens de finir la traduction...à un mot près. ^^
Je n'ai pas réussit à traduire "Entrustment", donc s'il y a des propositions, que ce soit pour ce mot ou pour la traduction complète.
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MessagePosté le: Sam 01 Aoû 2009, 7:39 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

En tout cas la dernière phrase est clair et nette, Sasuke veut écraser Konoha. Donc commencera-t-il par le Hokage et continuera-t-il sur ceux qui sont contre sa "politique de vengeance"?

Sinon beau travail, merci beaucoup Wink .

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MessagePosté le: Sam 01 Aoû 2009, 7:51 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Pour Entrustment, je crois qu'il semble l'utiliser dans le sens d'accomplissement ou de réalisation. Mais à lire le paragraphe qui suit ce titre je crois que le titre approprié serait Conséquences mais ce n'est pas une traduction directe d'Entrustment.

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MessagePosté le: Sam 01 Aoû 2009, 8:44 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Il se peut aussi que vu que c'est une trad à la base qui va du japonais à l'anglais, il y a déjà un petit souci de traduction. Néanmoins le reste est suffisamment clair pour confirmer le personnage.

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MessagePosté le: Sam 01 Aoû 2009, 10:17 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Gensei Noir a écrit:
Il se peut aussi que vu que c'est une trad à la base qui va du japonais à l'anglais, il y a déjà un petit souci de traduction. Néanmoins le reste est suffisamment clair pour confirmer le personnage.
Je pense qu'il faut plutôt chercher du côté de "truth", "trust" étant de la même famille. En littéral ça pourrait vouloir dire "mise au courant" ; en littéraire, ça pourrait être rendu par "La Vérité".

Sinon beau boulot Sasuke801 Wink

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MessagePosté le: Dim 02 Aoû 2009, 1:19 am    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Alors, j'ai cherché en début d'après-midi dans un dico anglais-anglais et c'était plus dans le genre : Se confier.

Donc, on pourrait peut être mettre comme titre Confidence ou Avoeux ou un synonyme plus fort qui signifierait se confier.

Sinon comme tu l'as dit Gensei, c'est clair et net : C'est bien Konoha qui est visée.
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MessagePosté le: Mar 04 Aoû 2009, 1:36 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Bon vu qu’il y a déjà quelques pages de traduites par notamment Kotetsu Hagane et Sasuke0801, je me suis dit qu’il fallait mettre un peu d’ordre là dedans.
Donc voici les différentes traductions de faites par nos deux compères :

Kyubi, Shodai, Madara 1

Madara 2

Madara 3 et Konan

Konan 2, Nagato, Kamui, les bijuus, amaterasu

Izuna Uchiha + fiches signalétiques sur Itachi, Nindaime, Sandaime et Yondaime

Tobirama Senju, Hiruzen Sarutobi et Namikaze Minato

Uchiha Itachi

Akatsuki

Rinnegan, Hanzô, Fukazaku, Mont Myôboku, Senjutsu, Kushina Uzumaki

Yugito 1, Hachibi 1

Yugito 2, Killer Bee 2

Kakashi 1, Killer Bee

Kakashi 2

Kisame, Zetsu, Changement de nature du chakra

Rôshi, Sakura

Yamata no jutsu, susanoo

FRS, Tsukyomi

Quelques techniques de Pain 1

Quelques techniques de Pain 2

Quelques techniques de Pain 3, Technique sur le mokuton

Yahiko, Fondements de konoha

Fonctionnement de Konoha

Uchiha Sasuke


Par contre on remarque qu'il y a plusieurs traductions pour certains personnages et ce sur des posts différents, il faudrait sans doute mettre les traductions sur un seul et même post?

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MessagePosté le: Sam 08 Aoû 2009, 8:20 am    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

je tient à vous remercier sincèrement vous avez fait un travail titanesque qui permet de renforcer ma connaissance ainsi que tous ceux qui suivront vos travaux mais je vais pas juste complimenter Wink
voici un lien pour dl le databook en anglais
http://rapidshare.com/files/235958525/NaChOfDaBo3HiShnoSh.rar
le pass est yoshimitsu

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MessagePosté le: Sam 08 Aoû 2009, 2:22 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Merci pour le fichier, ça serait bien de regarder ce qui a été traduit ou non par des membres du forum et si ce n'est pas le cas, les traduire.
Je ne me souviens pas avoir vu de traduction sur Gerotora, la grenouille-parchemin qu'invoque Jiraya.

Danzo par contre, je ne pense pas qu'il ait été fait, si c'est le cas, j'aimerai bien le traduire. Je vais rechercher sur les précédentes pages pour regarder, s'il n'y a rien, je m'y met.

Il y a quelques techniques intéressantes à traduire aussi.

Sinon merci pour l'organisation Gensei, on voit déjà plus clairement ce qui a été fait. Merci aussi pour toutes les pages que tu as ramené. Wink
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MessagePosté le: Sam 08 Aoû 2009, 11:35 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Effectivement il n'y a rien sur Danzou, donc je te laisse le traduire. Par contre j'aimerais bien pratiquer mon anglais donc je vais faire Choji et Tenten( héhé, le gros et la plante verte Cool )...Je n'ai pas vue Hinata et Temari en parcourant les traductions déjà faites. Est-ce que je me trompe en me disant que Kotetsu va vouloir s'en charger? Mr. Green .Donc commençons par mettre les pages en anglais:

source: bah le fichier de feel the power

Choji:
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Tenten:
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---Traductions---


Citation:
Choji:

Puissance avec un appétit insatiable...satisfaisant son estomac et s'entrainant dure.

Il y a environ trois ans, Choji prit les pillules secrète de son clan. Après cela, il fut frapper par une nouvelle malédiction nommée "rebond" . Pendant qu'il grandit jusqu'à l'age adulte, il doit aussi augmenter son poid chaque jour. C'est pour cette raison que même ces jours-ci, il lui est impossible de trop utiliser le "style rondelet". Cependant, Ce combat à donné à Choji une grande confiance en lui. Il a réalisé que lui aussi possède la puissance nécessaire pour sauver ses amis...!! À cause de cela, Chouji s'est entrainné avec zèle et a continué de manger...Il croit avec "Fierté" que la "nourriture" gouverne les Akimichi...!!
(NdSybaris: pas sure de la dernière phrase... )

Il peut maintenant utilisé la "technique de l'augmentation partiel"( Bubun Baika no Jutsu), une technique secrète des Akimichi, sans l'aide de pillules!! Le résultat d'un infatigable et difficle travail...!!

Sa spécialité, le "boulet humain hérissé" (Nikudan hari Sensha), a aussi (undergone?) améliorations.

son combo avec son meilleur ami Shikamaru va encore aussi bien. Grâce à la connection de leurs coeurs, ils font étalage d'un magnifique travail d'équipe!!

Autant qu'il est une personne aimable, il tient une grande quantité de colère. Finir le mot "gr..." est définitivement interdit...!!

"Parfait! Je vais aussi manger la portion de Shikamaru!!"

Date de naissance: 1er Mai
age: 16 ans
signe astrologique:taureau
Taille: 172,3 cm
poids: 87,5 kg
groupe sanguin: B
Personnalité: Gourmande, accomodant
nourriture favorite: Barbecue Coréin, pâtisseries comme collation(?)
nourriture détesté: Chose non-comestibles
Adversaire désiré: Quand il est à cour de provisions, n'importe qui peut faire l'affaire.
Mot préféré: Meat
Hobbies: acheter(et consommer immediatement) des desserts.

Voilà pour Choji...par cpntre pour le nom des techniques, on s'entend que c'est approximatif...^^'
et tout ce qu'on apprend c'est que les pillules Akimichi laisse des traces mêmes à long termes et que tant qu'il est pas adulte, Choji ne doit pas maigrir et est donc limité dans l'utilisation de ses technique en combat...


Citation:
Tenten:

Elle exécute une danse mortelle avec des lames innombrables volant dans les airs autour d'elle!

Elle polit et aiguise ses armes chaque jour pour qu'elles soient aussi aiguisées et mortelles que possibles, et ça se voit(?). Même Akatsuki a été surprit au point de baissé sa garde devant la variété d'armes que Tenten traine dans la bataille! Mais ce n'est pas tout ce que Tenten fait. Ses manières calmes et sa capacité de concentration guide son équipe pendant les missions, et quand vient le temps du combat, ses attaques à longues portées permettent à son équipe de prendre l'initiative. Si Tenten n'était pas là, aucun autre membre de son équipe ne pourrait utilisé leurs propres abilités à leur maximum. Pour l'équipe de Gai, dans laquelle chaque membre est extrêmement fort, Tenten est l'élément vital qui les lient ensemblent.

Un de ses roles les plus importants dans l'équipe est de gardé Gai et Lee concentré et sérieux, car qui sait ce qui peut leur arrivé quand il ne le sont pas.

Sa spécialité est une attaque à deux étapes utilisant des notes explosives. Elle utilise maintenant plus d'armes qu'avant.

Elle utilise ses armes pour tenir ses ennemis à distances, pour ensuite travailler dans une parfaite synchronization avec Lee et Neji en les couvrant.

Age: 17 ans
Date d'anniversaire: 9 mars
signe astrologique: Poisson
taille: 164cm
poids: 47.3 kg
groupe sanguin: B
personnalité: chercheuse intransigeante, curieuse, tact d'une masse d'arme(c'est traduit litérallement de "tact of a sledgehammer",ça semble être une expression courante que je ne connais pas...mais j'en déduit qu'elle n'en a pas^^')
nourriture favorite: Baozihttp://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baozi Zhimazao
nourriture détestée: Umeboshihttp://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Umeboshi
adversaire désiré: Temari, Sakura
phrase favorite: Je ne manque jamais ma cible!
Hobbie: divination

(la fiche de Tenten est plus facile à traduire que celle de Choji, mais j'ai due faire une erreur, parce qu'ils la décrivent comme utile...)

donc voilà, je ne suis peut être pas aussi bonne que Kotetsu et Sasuke0801, mais j'imagine que ça va...je vais peut être en faire d'autres, surement Suigetsu et Neji. Si vous trouvez des erreurs ou des idées pour les parties que j'ai moins bien comprit n'hésitez pas et j'éditerais Very Happy
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MessagePosté le: Lun 10 Aoû 2009, 2:46 am    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Je ne passe qu'en coup de vent, je n'ai donc pas lu tes traductions entièrement, simplement survolées et j'ai vu ton petit problème de traduction sur Tenten.

Pour tact of a sledgehammer, il faut plus le traduire par quelque chose du genre "habile du maniement d'armes". (c'est vague là bien sûr)
Pour t'aider, tu peux chercher sur google in English, la définition de tact, et tu verras que la définition te mène vers l'habileté, le sens du touché.

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Finalement, je ne pense pas traduire pendant quelques jours, petit projet à côté. Donc voici la traduction sur Danzo.

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Page 098-099
Danzo


Numéro d'immatriculation ninja : 000272
Age : 72 ans
Anniversaire : 6 Janvier (Capricorne)
Taille : 170.0 cm
Poids : 52.7 kg
Groupe sanguin : AB
Personnalité : Ambitieux, discret, inflexible
Nourriture favorite : Hijiki (algue brune ressemblant à des nouilles noires), Genmaicha (thé vert japonais mélangé à des grains de riz grillés).
Partie d'aliment préférée : Warabimochi (une des confiseries les plus populaires)
Veut affronter : Personne
Phrase favorite : N'hésitez pas
Hobbies : Appréciation d'art, rédaction de journaux.

« Les sentiments créent la haine...qui elle-même crée la guerre. »


Le côté obscure de Konoha, soutenant profondément l'arbre dans ses racines !

Le chef de la racine fait son apparition, coïncidant avec le retour de Naruto. Il y a une tension considérable entre lui et l'actuel Hokage, petite fille du premier et gardienne des vieilles traditions. (Conservatrice)

Il y a longtemps, Danzo était opposé à Sarutobi Hiruzen pour la course du titre de Hokage. Son idée du ninja est "Celui qui sacrifie entièrement sa volonté pour les souhaits de son pays et de son village". En raison de cette perspective, il perdit ses chances pour le titre.

Par la suite, il créa son propre groupe parmi les membres de l'Anbu sous le contrôle du Hokage, appelée la Racine. Il augmenta le nombre de Shinobi pour se conformer à sa volonté, confirmant la maitrise sur "l'obscurité" de Konoha. Maintenant que le troisième Hokage est mort, il reste pour voir quel chemin la Racine prendra.

(Bulle : « Tu n'as ni nom, ni sentiments... »)
Ces Shinobi représentent la vision de la Racine. Ils sont le côté sombre de Konoha et agissent en tant qu'armes dissimulées de Danzo.

(Bulle : « Donc ... je peux simplement espérer que les enseignements de ce craintif et indécis Sandaime... ne se sont pas annexés à elle...Très bien... »)
Vu comme le "faucon" de Konoha. Dans son esprit, il voit le futur sous ses traits.

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MessagePosté le: Ven 14 Aoû 2009, 1:47 am    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Je suis en train de traduire les pages de Suig' et de Lee.

Je vais éditer mon message pour les mettre.

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MessagePosté le: Ven 14 Aoû 2009, 2:51 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Je ne sais pas si les pages de Gai et Sasuke-Itachi (en noir) ont été traduites.
Je vais vérifier, si ce n'est pas le cas, je m'occupe de celles-là.
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MessagePosté le: Mar 18 Aoû 2009, 8:11 pm    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Bon il est étonnant que nous n'ayons pas encore les pages sur les sannins.

Donc pour y remédier:
Orochimaru 1
Orochimaru 2

Jiraya:
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Page 1

"Master of the Fourth Hokage", "Legendary Sannin", "Toad Hermit"... For his overwhelming skill as a shinobi and in related areas, Jiraiya is a great hero, continuously lauded as a "Living Legend" by the shinobi of Konoha. However, the man himself raises an objection to such praise. According to him, he has no such qualifications. Deep down, Jiraiya is compiling his personal, intimate story.

Page 2

[Homecoming]
With Naruto's traveling studies completed, Jiraiya came back to the Hidden Village of Konoha after two years and a half. With his disciple entrusted to Kakashi, Jiraiya faded into the shadows, and resumed his intelligence-gathering activities. Which meant, chasing after the bonds between Naruto and Sasuke, as well as his own bonds with Orochimaru.

[The Sannin]
Orochimaru used to be a comrade, with whom the Sannin made it into legend. Stopping his madness was Jiraiya's self-inflicted punishment, an ever-present concern he harbored like a shadow. For that very reason, he even turned down the position of Hokage, and proceeded to support the village from the shadows.
But Orochimaru died suddenly. This informed Jiraiya that an era had come to an end. Jiraiya slipped into the shadows once again. To fight off the new threat, and protect the woman and the village he loved...

[Fortuitous Encounter]
Pain. He who controls the Akatsuki, that dark cloud covering the shinobi world in darkness. When the confrontation Jiraiya has been seeking out takes place, Jiraiya sees traces of his former disciple, Nagato, in the ripples within Pain's eyes... "I want to protect my friends, even if I go through a hell of pain for it". That was the young boy's wish, his oath.

Once he surmounted his pain, he'd be the one to show the way to the world. The disciple who once believed so had completely changed. Setting his eyes upon him, Jiraiya fully realizes the depth of his own destiny, and how heavy the "Chains of Fate" are, to give things a name!!

[Prophecy]
In the middle of a battle to the death, Jiraiya recalls the prophecy he's been delivered by the Grand Toad Hermit. "His disciple would bring about a significant change to the world." No good, no prosperity could possibly come out of the revolution Pain is ushering!! So once again, he makes a choice. The grown man who used to be his favorite student, whom he believed to be the Child of Prophecy, he shall cast down into oblivion, with his very own hands...

Page 3

[Him who Withstands and Endures]
The fact he couldn't save Minato and his own master overcomes his mind. He regrets he couldn't stop Orochimaru... To this point, he hasn't accomplished anything in his entire life. Before he'd realized it, a feeling of resignation had started to sprout within Jiraiya... However, while he is covered in wounds, two of his disciples have him remember what he really is about. The most important thing to a shinobi. That is, "a heart that withstands and endures."

[Entrusted Hope]
His heart has stopped, every cell in his body has renounced to life. Even then, Jiraiya does not give up. The facts he's grasped... and his will, he writes onto Fukasaku's back, with trembling fingertips!! So he can entrust them to his last disciple, the Child of Prophecy!!

The "Tale of the Gallant Jiraiya" finally comes to an end... However, the new story Jiraiya has to compose is yet to start, that is for sure!!

Captions

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That's what the cool older people do, innit?

The Toad Hermit agitates his lion's mane is a cheerful and happy Kabuki dance!!

Page 2

Leaving the front stage to the next generation, he choses himself to act from within the shadows.

In his reunion with with his disciple, remembering is an important mission.

Page 3

He taught the way of the shinobi to his favorite students, he enforces it upon himself!!

Picture comments

Page 1

- Jiraiya has been pursuing his intelligence activities for long years. The technique he uses to unseal people's lips while avoiding needless killing is truly brilliant!!

- A top-notch strategy, cultivated from experience, rich in shrewdness!! It shall cut the Gordian knot!!

- Even in the middle of a battle to the death, the comical pauses are guaranteed!! A joyful way to encourage himself!!

Page 2

- From his master's hands to those of his superior officer. Naruto is recognized as a grown man by Jiraiya.

- Inside of Naruto, a calamity slumbers. Even though he's recognized Naruto's talent, he hasn't forgotten to be cautious...

- The Trio* that walked through bloody battlefields together. Their bonds are yet to fade away.

- Tsunade never stopped rejecting him. Even with the accumulation of years his feelings have remained unshaken, but as a man, he has the elegance not to express them.

- Are those markings tears of blood shed before his disciple's transfiguration?

- No doubt about it, the choice he was told about takes place now!! For the shinobi world must be protected, Jiraiya comes to a decision.

- Jiraiya's strike, where sympathy meets determination!! This attack destroyed Pain's eyes...!!

Page 3

- With his left arm gone, he is no longer in a condition to fight. Despite this, Jiraiya keeps up the challenge!!

- The Pains swooped down all at once. With their daggers, they pierced through Jiraiya's flesh, then his heart!!

- As he was fading away, Jiraiya came** to his true decision. His smile expresses his trust in the one he entrusted with everything!!
*"Trio" is the best I could come up with to translate "Sansukumi". The word refers to a "rock-paper-scissors" relationship.

**The Japanese text refers in one word to concepts that need a slightly lengthier explanation in Western languages. Jiraiya "came to a decision". But the word I translated as "came" can also refer to Buddhist Enlightenment, understanding of the true meaning of existence, that kind of stuff... This is in perfect accordance with Pain's theme as a "God" and a Boddhisatva.


Tsunade:
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The first female Hokage since the foundation of the Leaf village. Strong and talented, she was once hailed as one of the Sannin, along with Orochimaru and Jiraiya. With her inauguration as Godaime, came a great number of expectations, and she immediately displayed her wit and skill as a village leader. Her assistance in the formation of medical ninjas resulted in a steady increase in excellency. Aware of Akatsuki's endeavors, she took swift action in order to protect the village but to no avail. Ninjas, such as Asuma and Jiraiya, who had long years of service behind them were lost. Tsunade will carry them on. All the hopes and feelings of those who were lost, that is. And the blazing Will of Fire shall keep on burning.

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- As the Fifth Hokage, I will protect it.

- She's inherited the Will of Fire, and she will protect Konoha with her boiling, unshakable spirit.

Picture comments

- Her threatening attitude is the same even in front of the two councilors!! Once she trusts someone, it lasts until the very end.

- Tsunade's most ardent wish... She doesn't want to lose any more of those who are precious to her.

- Becoming Hokage didn't alter her lively personality. It... reinforced it instead?!


La page sur amaterasu, pas celle de sa transmission par Itachi sur Sasuke, mais la technique elle même. Bon c'est une page du premier data book me semble-t-il:
Amaterasu

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MessagePosté le: Mer 19 Aoû 2009, 12:27 am    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

J'ai vu que la page sur Itachi et Sasuke a été faite, pour Gai je ne sais pas. Mais je pense que la priorité sur le coup est les Sannin.
Je veux bien me charger de Jiraya. On verra pour Gai plus tard.
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MessagePosté le: Jeu 20 Aoû 2009, 12:55 am    Sujet du message: Répondre en citant

Désoler d'être en retard pour mes trads j'ai pas pu avoir l'ordi depuis vendredi passer. Mon ordi recevais pas le signal internet, alors j'ai pas pu toucher a l'ordi(Réparation)... Alors je m'y remet bientôt juste lire les presque 50 pages de texte Rolling Eyes.

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